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1/4 incercare

Wed Nov 22, 2006, 12:11 PM
pick your side
the side you'll keep clean
stained on the inside
caught in between
the line crosses
between your eyes
your line of simmetry
is someone's horizon.

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:iconanomia-grey:
initial era inca una din poeziile alea care tasnesc de nicaieri, si de obicei cam tot intr-acolo se indreapta...dar de data asta am remarcat si o puternica eterogenitate. Asa ca am paste-uit tot restul intr-un document Word, si am lasat numai strofa asta, care imi placea mai mult. Dar vreau sa mai lucrez si la alalelte :)

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If on a winter's night a traveler...
:iconcenumesimplu:
Deci avem sanse la 1/1? :)
:iconanomia-grey:
sure! thank u for the support :hug: this really means a lot to me

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If on a winter's night a traveler...
:iconcenumesimplu:
I can understand you! :hug:
:iconlugarid:
astazi se mai vad intamplator
si-atunci grabiti sa para vor
nu mai urca, zmeie
si nici o scanteie
nu se mai aprinde-n ochii lor

(mai tii minte ce ti`am promis in legatura cu versurile?)
:iconanomia-grey:
daca tot ma provoci, at least give me fair chances =P

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If on a winter's night a traveler...

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